Thursday, 24 June 2010
Saturday, 19 June 2010
Yr 9 Creative Writing comes to town
The Week Away
Rebecca Taylor
The blood soaked her t-shirt. Rivulets of water mixed with eyeliner and mascara streaked her face. ‘Please! Please help me!’ she cried. No one came. Her body heaved, convulsing in pain as an unbearable ache rocked through her body. Her limbs were on fire. She screamed piercingly through the dead silence of the wood. She gripped the rough tree trunk behind her and tried to force herself up. Her legs failed to support her, and she crashed to the ground. ‘Help!’ she cried. ‘Please.’ But all she could hear was the echo of her words, and her mind returned to what had happened two weeks ago.
It was a normal day in the life of Victoria Richardson, the ‘rich kid’ of the estate. She walked into school and people cleared the way for her. Boys would stop and stare. Girls clung to her arm and jabbered constant nothings into
She sauntered into Geography, 10 minutes late. Sir was just talking about a field trip. She personally hated Geography. There was no one to talk to. There were just geeks and nerds that only deserved to be contemptuously ignored. And her parents had made her take it, despite their obvious unnoticeable love toward her, as they were too busy with their own lives to bother with her. She hated her parents. Her thoughts were rudely interrupted when Mr. Ross tapped her lightly on the shoulder. ‘Miss Richardson?’ he said, and handed her the letter. It was still warm as she took it out of his hand. She briefly read it, skimming the most important parts quickly. ‘What the hell’ she thought and she decided to go. At least it would get her out of the house and away from the constant shouting of her house. And this tiny decision inexplicably changed her fate.
The bell rang.
“Matthew Hurley?” the one called rose cried. They burst out into laughter, and
As she stepped inside her house, the sound of rough, low arguments and mutterings greeted her. She sighed, and went up to her room. She signed her letter herself, she was very practised at it. She then decided she was bored. She picked up the book all her friends had been wittering on about. “…They stood out like angels in the school…” Her eyes caught that line, and she grinned smugly, knowing who that would have referred to in her school.
Saturday came quickly. Her pale white limbs lifted her bright purple suitcase, and she climbed onto the coach, 10 minutes late. They were off to
4 hours later, the coach was still going, but now the teachers were trying to make everyone happy, and sing some songs. The only two that were not participating were Victoria and Matt, who simultaneously bent down to get their iPods out of their bags. Matt switched on Metallica and Guns N Roses, whilst
Matt had got up late on Saturday, but had still made it in time to the trip. He sat down on the coach near the back. He had only agreed to come because Mr. Ross was a decent teacher. It looked like he was the last one on the coach, anyway. The mid-afternoon was alight with a tawny glow, and he admired this for a second, and then looked up to see the tall shadow crossed upon it. Victoria Richardson. The one person that made his scenery darken, but also glow at the same time. She was a horrible person, but my was she beautiful. Her brilliant green eyes met his in a look of pure contempt. She held them there; their eyes were locked in a death grip and Matt could hardly break away. She made her way over to him, her limbs moving elegantly across the coach. She sat neatly down next to him, almost on the edge of her seat, with certain poise about her. Neither of them bothered with a greeting, just turned their heads to face the opposite way.
“We’re here!” Mr. Ross’s voice joyously called out. Matt was asleep.
No wardrobe??? There were only two drawers?
“Hey, don’t laugh in his face,” Mr Urie said, annoyed, “You never take any notice of what he says. You are always so rude and ignorant! And I don’t even know why you came on this trip!”
The sun rose too early, too bright in the tantalisingly blue sky the next morning. Mr Ross, always cheerful, knocked on the girls’ dorm door. “Good day for a hike today, eh girls?” he said, “Get some good walking gear on,” But he didn’t come in and check they were awake, he just stalked off, no doubt to find Mr Urie.
Matt awoke abruptly with a start as Mr Ross and Mr Urie rapped loud on their door. “Boys, get up, we’re going hiking!!!” There were moans from all over the dorm, but it just made them laugh as they sang through the door. Matt realised it was one of his favourite bands, and this spurred him on as he got dressed, singing all the while.
Everyone met in the small hall downstairs for breakfast. Most people were dressed in shorts and tops that were relatively cheap and didn’t matter so much. Not
“Victoria?” Mr Urie called, and her head snapped up in answer. “You’re going to stay indoors today as your behaviour is unacceptable, and anyway, your clothes are completely inappropriate.” All
She silently smirked as they skipped out at around ten o clock. She then took out her headphones, and pressed play. 4 hours, a whole music library and 29 pages later,
She crept around the outskirts of the building, and she smelt the freshly painted gate, and wrinkled her nose. As the gate was already open, she simply stepped out and decided to go up the short hill on the other side of the wood. So, she made her way over to the lush green of the trees…
Matt had been on the hike for 7 hours now, and they were about to get into the coach to get back. It had been a long and weary walk, but contrastingly, it had been rather fun. He wondered what
The wood had looked so much more intimidating than it actually was. When
She lay on the sparkling grass on the hill, and smiled and shut her eyes. She loved to sunbathe, it was so relaxing, and she felt she could get away from all the troubles in her life if she just lay with her eyes shut, feeling the sun beat down on her body. As she lay there she thought about the week ahead and sighed in distaste. She felt her fatigue looming over her, and promptly fell asleep. Still in deep slumber, she had a disturbing dream. A stalker was following her, and it was terrifying. Just as he extended his arm toward her, she awoke, gasping and sweating. Her eyes slowly adjusted to the dark, and she realised – it was very late.
As the clock turned 9, Matt was worrying. He couldn’t go and tell Mr Ross, because him and Mr Urie had gone up to the staff room and locked the door, planning the week probably. Matt had been sat fretting for at least 10 minutes. He gave it another ten, and then decided to go look for her. He had a bad feeling that she was hurt in some way, and no one else would go look for her. He shrugged on his coat, and headed out into the night.
The blood soaked her t-shirt. Rivulets of water from the latest downpour, awash with tears, mascara and eyeliner streaked her face. “Please! Please help me!” She cried. No one came. Her body heaved as more blood escaped, convulsing as pain shocked through her body. Her limbs were on fire. She screamed piercingly through the dead silence of the wood. She gripped the rough tree trunk behind her and tried to force herself up, to no avail. She crashed once more to the ground, as her good leg failed to support her on its own. “Help!” she cried. “Please,” But all she could hear was the echo of her words.
Feeling truly alone, she looked over her life, all this time she had been alienating people-inevitably coming up to this moment. She thought of Matt and anyone else she’d previously thought she was better than, and felt a burning sense of regret. Finally realising everything she’d done and how she was now alone, she let her tears take over and she cried, shaking uncontrollably.
In the midst of this crying fit, a dark shadow had crept over her, and her breath caught, and she closed her eyes, not wanting to see who it was, not wanting anyone to see her in this state. “
Matt had found
“No problem,” she grinned, and sat down next to Matt eagerly. They chatted excitedly about the net trip, and discussed music and TV and books, and found out they weren’t all that different.
Footsteps
Nathan Taylor
The four men walked into the peaceful bank, their faces grim under their ski masks. They moved quickly along the tacky carpet. They came up to the plump cheerful receptionist. The leader pulled out a sawn of shotgun and carefully aimed it at the woman’s head. Her face went pale and sweat beads appeared on her forehead. She refused at first, but then the leader slowly loaded up his shotgun and she complied straight away with their demands, and then went straight for the alarm. The leader tried to stop her, but the wailing of the alarm filled the whole district. The gang looked around in panic, the wailing of the alarm was soon echoed by the wailing of a siren and soon the police blockaded the bank.
The four men looked around desperately, the arrogance of the leader evaporating quickly. He looked around and gestured to his gang, they set their malicious eyes on the helpless hostages on the floor...
They shuffled out of the bank, two holding hostages, a lady and her son; the police wet their lips nervously and looked to their superior who surveyed the scene with despair, whilst the robbers shuffled toward their getaway van. Indecisiveness shook the police, some yearning to shoot, but worried about hitting the civilians, but the robbers had already reached their beacon of escape: the van. One of them said “Boss, there’s only room for one hostage.” The leader harshly shoved the sobbing lady out and took her son, soon when the van was nearly out of earshot, 4 bullets echoed from within the van...
1 Year later...
The leader later escaped to an idyllic village, where the houses were marble white and the air was fresh and the sweet aroma of the bakery was present.
The leader had bought an immense mansion on a hill, overlooking the village and changed his name to Clive Johnson, severing all ties with his past. Just another anonymous face. As he stepped out of his mansion, he decided to drink at the local tavern and set off.
Halfway down the long cobbled street, his ears pricked up and he heard a noise, a slight pitter patter of feet. The footsteps matched his own, never quickening nor slowing down. Clive broke into sprint pace and hurled down the street. Eventually he slowed to a stop and gasped, his ears strained, but he heard nothing. He let out a relieved sigh and started walking again and heard the footsteps. He spun around and caught a glimpse of a shaggy maned boy and gulped.
He sprinted all the way to the tavern and soon reached the doors. He looked behind him, no one there. Clive released a breath he didn’t realise he had been holding and he steadied his hand against the tavern’s doors and pushed.
He was greeted by the barman with a smile and asked, “What would you like?” Clive sat down relieved and was just about to answer when he saw a wisp of hair behind the barman, who noticed the lack of attention and glanced behind, seeing nothing, Clive turned pale and lurched out of his seat to the toilet, knocking over a customer.
He stumbled over to the sink and splashed his face with cool refreshing water, he glanced up to the mirror and stared behind him. No one there.
He lurched out of the tavern, the barman staring after him inquisitively. Clive sprinted for home, the sun falling over the horizon and darkness engulfing everything. The cobbles of the street seemed intent on tripping him up, the wind howled and a fog descended. He tripped and cursed and prayed to a God he didn’t believe in. His prayers were answered as he approached the immaculate gates and raced through them up to his bedroom and clambered into his bed.
His hand scrambled for a weapon next to his nightstand, knocking over the cigarettes until his hand fastened around a lighter and ignited it to ward off his malignant stalker. His eyes scrutinized the darkness until he became weary and his eyes drooped and he drifted off.
He woke up in a cold sweat, panting, blinking and taking in his surroundings. There was a shape that materialised out of the darkness out of nothing at the end of his bed and took the form of the shaggy maned boy.
His eyes bulging, Clive fumbled with his lighter, ignited it and stared into unwavering, bloodshot eyes. Clive shrank back and tried jabbing the lighter. “What do you want with me?” The boy crept closer, his knees wrinkling the bed. A pungent smell of decay wafted across the room, making Clive gasp.
The boy’s pale hands parted his hair and revealed his face; Clive repeated “What do you want with me?” The boy replied “Do I look like someone you killed?”
Clive started with shock recognition; he flailed his arms and connected with the boy’s face, knocking him to the ground where he lay lifeless. Clive peered with confusion from his bed.
Instantly, the ghost started convulsing, his limbs flailing, and then he dissolved, leaving nothing but the black attire he had worn behind.
Then a figure erupted out of the clothes, tall and exuding an aura of danger. He turned his head towards Clive; it was a skull, as pale and luminous as the moon. His dark, pitiless sockets for eyes focused on Clive who waved his lighter feebly to ward him off. The skeleton laughed a high shrill laugh and said, “You don’t need lighters where you’re going...”